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Blackness by ~IlluminatedSpectre:iconIlluminatedSpectre:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Song


Blackness

It was the mirror that was speaking
it's multi-coloured lies,
and if she were to listen,
she would seek her own demise.

It was blackness, then
that most haunted night,
she took him to her,
by firelight.

Nothing spoken,
nothing blamed,
then how was she
mortally framed?

Did he think he could seek through
the mirror and its lies
This time she said, it's different
I DO NOT hear your cries.

So, she locked him where he wanted to be
Alone within his mind
And she left him locked away
In the mirrors multi-coloured lies
©2009 ~IlluminatedSpectre
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Author's Comments

My friend, on here as goatheadcorp, encouraged me to add this. He said it sounded like a song, so I added it in poetry under songs.
This was just something in my head.
Please read my journal for a clearer view. Any questions, comments are more than welcome.

Thank You.

ILS

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~IlluminatedSpectre Jan 26, 2009, 8:33:55 PM
I probably should have added this above,but I'm really was really excited. Hee-Hee!!
Anything that I post is NOT for sale or re-print without my EXPRESSED permission.
Hate to be a killjoy. But it is my stuff.

Thank You.

ILS

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In Darkness She Waits

"Will you lend yourself to beauty that will horrify?"
Dancing Through Sundays, AFI
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=goatheadcorp Jan 26, 2009, 8:43:48 PM
yeah..first deviation :thumbsup:
teehee..this will be cool for a symphonic black metal song :horns:

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~IlluminatedSpectre Jan 26, 2009, 9:01:19 PM
Ok, I'll bring it Dani on the 26th of February. That'll be excuse for getting back stage. Hee-Hee-Hee. :)


ILS

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Veritas Vos Liberabit

In Darkness She Waits

"Will you lend yourself to beauty that will horrify?"
Dancing Through Sundays, AFI
:icongoatheadcorp:
=goatheadcorp Jan 26, 2009, 9:07:12 PM
yeah..thats right, well good luck then :P
Dani Filth is a great vocalist and lyrics writer :thumbsup:

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=Eternal-Salvation Jan 27, 2009, 10:48:55 AM
Ah it does sound like a song :) this could be really easily put to music
i like the first and last verses especially, very good start and end :D

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~pingvin66666 Feb 2, 2009, 1:10:42 AM
This is awesome! I imagined this in Death Metal/Metalcore music, like As I Lay Dying! Awesome! I'm gonna favin' it!

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~jensingleton Feb 2, 2009, 9:25:00 PM
Awesome writing, so atmospheric too! Love it :)
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~IlluminatedSpectre Feb 3, 2009, 1:22:03 PM
Thanks so much for the faves. Thank you for your support. :hug:


ILS

--
Veritas Vos Liberabit

In Darkness She Waits

"Will you lend yourself to beauty that will horrify?"
Dancing Through Sundays, AFI
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